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19 April 2008 @ 01:31 pm
Remember When...?- McFly S/A  

Title: Remember When...?
Fandom/Pairing: McFly/Flones
Rating: PG
Warnings: Slash =D

“Tell me a story, Daddy!” a chipper young voice met an older blondes ears.

The man gathered a young girl in his arms, holding her tightly, “What’d you want to hear, Mariah?”

The dark haired girl pondered, her blue eyes sparkling as an answer sprung to mind. “The one about how Daddy asked you to marry him!”

“Don’t you ever tire of that?”

“Daaady!” the girl pouted her lips, “I last heard it when I was only three, I’m a whole six years old now!”

“Six whole years!? Since when did you grow?” the adult grinned as his daughters mouth dropped open in shock. “I’m kidding, sweetie. I know how old you are!”

Mariah’s face broke out in a wide smile, “So will you tell me the story?”

“Fine, fine,” the blonde said, “you all comfy?”

The girl nodded, her legs tucked under her as she propped herself upon the bed.

“Well, once upon a time, Danny rented a Disney movie…”

--

Tom was a dork; it was pretty much common knowledge. His wardrobe overflowed with Ghostbusters and Star Wars tees, while his love for stuffed animals was ever noticeable by the large quantities of stuffed figures on his bed. Perhaps the strangest thing came in the form of his film collection. With titles like ’Die Hard’ and ’Rocky’, it seemed like it could have been a normal man’s video collection. However, Tom had a fascination with Disney movies, something that the guys (albeit Danny) made fun of. It wasn’t that he was immature or childish; it was the simple fact that the innocent brilliance of the movies entranced him.

Maybe this is why Danny thought this would work, the blonde pondered. The farther into ’Cinderella’, the more he noticed the brunette’s uneasiness. The hands on his hips were shaking slightly, and his breathing seemed a bit off. Tom shrugged it off, however, figuring

Danny would let him know what was up later on in the night.

---

“He was nervous ’coz he was about to ask you to marry him!” a squeal escaped the young brunette girl’s lips.

“I didn’t know that! I thought something was dodgy with his tea!” Tom raised his hands in defense.

Mariah shook her head, “Daddy, you were so blind back then!”

“Yeh, I was. Would you mind if I continued on?”

She shook her head, snuggling into the duvet.

“As I was saying, he was acting kind of strange, but I just brushed it off…”

---

Music swelled on screen as Cinderella and her Prince Charming danced. Tom’s chest rose and fell with a heavy sigh.

“Eh?” questioned the brunette.

“S’ just romantic, that’s all,” his other half replied, looking up into the deep cerulean orbs.

Danny chuckled, “You’re a sap. You know that, right?”

Tom matched Danny’s grin, “I may be, but I’m your sap.”

Danny kissed Tom’s hair lovingly, smoothing down the golden locks. “I love you, Tom.” he muttered into the hair, taking in his love’s scent - lavender, cologne and all things Tom.

“I love you too, Dan”

“Will you marry me?”

The blondes head shot up, forgetting about the movie. “What?!”

Danny cursed under his breath, “I didn’t mean to-”

“-to say it?” Tom finished, “It’s fine. It’s okay.”

“No, I just-” his cheeks were tinged with a bit of pink, “I meant to ask, but I had something a

lot more…a lot better planned.”

The blonde kissed the others lips light-

---

“Eww, Daddy! I don’t want to hear about you and him kissing!

Tom shook his head with a grin, “That’s as bad as it gets, I promise.”

“Really?”

“Of course really. Now do you want to hear the rest?”

“Yes please”

“Okay sweetie. So as I said, I had kissed him to let him know he was fine…”

---

“I screwed that up well, didn’t I?” the younger of the two shook his head, eyes not meeting

the blonde’s. “I had this entire thing planned out, and I didn’t say any of it.”

The elder then took his hand and placed it on top of Danny’s. “If it makes you feel better, you can still say it.”

Danny gave him a sheepish smile. “Well, what I was going to say was…erm. Damnit, now I can’t remember!”

A chuckle left the blonde’s lips, “Another Jones moment, eh?”

“Yeah…wait a moment, since when did you name my moments?”

“Since now.” Tom pecked Danny’s cheek softly.

---

“Daddy!”

“What?!”

“You said there wouldn’t be any more kissing!”

“Pardon me, dearest Mariah.” Tom’s face broke out into a wide grin.

“S’okay” Mariah nodded, “Can you keep going? The next part’s my favorite!”

“Sure thing, honey. Then, Danny decided to improvise…”

---

“Do you really want to marry me?” the blonde asked, his face tinted pink slightly. The other man nodded, squeezing his hand.

“You mean the world to me, Tom. It sounds stupid and cheesy, but I dunno how else to explain it. You make my heart skip so many beats, it’s a wonder I’m still alive. I love you, so much and I don’t want to miss a thing.” Danny was smiling, and so was Tom, “You’re my better half, no doubt. I can’t imagine life without you. Will you marry me, Tom?”

Tom’s mouth hung open slightly, “Did you come up with that on the spot?”

“Erm, yeah?” the younger’s brow furrowed in confusion.

“No wonder we have you to write the lyrics, you legend. Of course I’ll marry you!”

Twin grins appeared as Danny held Tom tightly in his arms, as the film came to its happy ending.

---

A loud sigh was exhaled from the young girl on the bed. “You and Daddy are so romantic.”

Tom chuckled, “Yeah, I guess we are. That do it for you, sweetie?”

Mariah nodded with a yawn. “I have a question though, Daddy.”

The adult nodded, “Did you and Daddy look like Prince Charming and Sinnersella at your wedding?”

“Something like that,” Tom looked at his daughter adoringly, “Night, hun.”

She pouted, “One last story?”

“Which one?” the blonde sighed.

“I wanna know what happened after you said yes! Did you dance like in the movie?”

“That’s for a later date,” he stood up, tucking Mariah in before heading to the door, “Night, sweetie.”

“Night daddy.”

Tom shut the door, shaking his head, “A much later date.”

 
 
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( 24 comments — Post a new comment )
~*Star*~: Flones <3[info]star55 on April 20th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Sorry, I stumbled across this after you commented to say you were using my McFly mood theme.

Can I just say that was probably one of the most gorgeous things I have read in a while?

I adore Flones and the thought of them having kids is just... *sighs happily* makes me mushy =D

I love how Mariah knows the story but still wants to hear it, despite the kissing =P

It made me giggle when she asked if they danced. It's obvious they didn't.

This was just fabulous!!

wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 20th, 2008 06:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for replying!

Your icon seems so appropriate =D

Flones and Pudd are my OTPs =] but Junes is my guilty pleasure.

Thanks again!
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 20th, 2008 10:46 pm (UTC)
You're welcome
Is it okay for me to read your work?
It's just amazing!!

Pones is my otp but I have a massive weakness for Flones ;-)

I love Junes as well ^_^

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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 20th, 2008 11:35 pm (UTC)
Of course it's okay!
=D
Thank you so much for the compliment!

Lol, I think I wrote a Floynter once, but never again... XD

For some reason, I can't picture Fludd... probably coz Tom is the straightest gay man ever. =]
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 20th, 2008 11:38 pm (UTC)
Ooh yay =)
I read some of your other stuff (the two drabbles) but I thought I might seem stalker-ish if I commented on all of them
I shall comment tonight when I get in from work ^_^

I like all of the pairings but Pudd is my least favourite =/

I adore Fludd ;-)
They seem very ... cute to me =D

♥♥♥
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 20th, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
=0 stalkerish?! Never!
=P

You live in Australia, right? So what time is it there if you're still at work?

It's 5:48 pm on Sunday here. XD

Lol, I think Pudd is my 2nd OTP because I already have Flones and I just can't have Doug and Haz all alone...

I guess that's when an OT4 comes in XD

Maybe I'd like Fludd if I read a decent fic. -shrug-

Lol, would it seem stalkerish if I commented on like all of your fics? Coz I'm thinking on it. =o
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 20th, 2008 11:51 pm (UTC)
Oooh yay! I love to comment =D

Yup i'm an Aussie
It is 9.20 am here monday morning ^_^

Pones is my first, then fludd, flones and junes all next =)

Floynter and pudd are last =/

I love Fludd fics =D

Oooh I'd love you too!
I love comments ^_^

♥♥♥
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 20th, 2008 11:56 pm (UTC)
=o So you're in a time machine or something!? THAT'S AMAZING!

I'm not old enough to work =/ I'll be sixteen soon though! (My b-day's May 9th)

Hmm, I think it may be:

Flones
Pones
Junes
Pudd
Floynter
Fludd

But I just found a Fludd fic and am waiting to see if I may be converted. =o

ohh, expect lots of comments =
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 12:02 am (UTC)
Lol, nah, just in another time zone ^_^

Lap it up while you can!! I like working but it takes over sometimes =(

Ooh I hope you enjoy the Fludd!!

*beams* Yay!!
♥♥♥
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
Yeh, so guess what?

That Fludd fic? It was yours!

Satin, I believe.

And holy spazzatron, now I'm converted.

Congratulations =D

School is killllller. I have four Advanced Placement classes next year and might be in the National Honor Society D=

Over the summer, my goal is to write a chaptered fic, but I can't begin it! It always sounds really clichéd D=

Anyway, enough ranting. lol.
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 12:14 am (UTC)
I saw your comment *hugs*
I love Fludd ^___^

Ooh wow, I never had anything like that at school. It was just straight subjects for me, no advanced anything =/

Ooh what pairing are you planning to do?
I want to finish my 3rd Pones book and my chaptered Flones =d

I love ranting ^_^

♥♥♥
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 12:21 am (UTC)
Yeh, forget Pudd. Fludd is my new OTP. =D

Yeh, we have honors and AP and all this random stuff. XD I'm gonna die next year, I just am wondering when.

I was thinking Flones, since it's only the cutest thing ever. I have this standalone (I don't think it's posted on here... oh, it's not, but I'll post it in a few) that I could possibly expand on and make into at least a short chaptered slash.

=O this may be a slow question, but this 3rd Pones book, it would be the sequel to I'll Stand Right Beside You? And chaptered Flones? YES PLEASE.

=D

Ranting is the best. =]
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 12:27 am (UTC)
*blushes* omg really? *blushes more*

It makes me glad I never had to do that ...

ooh I can't wait!
I've been wanting to write something with somebody lately...

Yup that would be the sequel to I'll Stand Right Beside You =)
My chaptered Flones is slow >.<

it is! I love to rant =D
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 12:33 am (UTC)
Lol, ya really! =]

I don't want to do it, but my parents think it's best XD

=O FJSFJSKLDHFLSFHAS I love ISRBY (cool intials =D). It makes me want to squish Dougie and Danny coz they're too cute.

And Nat and Riley are my heroes. Random fact. =]

I posted that Flones S/A I was talking about. It took me a while to figure out I didn't do the lj cut right

-facepalm-
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 12:37 am (UTC)
Well you might get something out of it at the end!!

Lol. I'm glad you like ISRBY. I loved THNL and the sequel was planned/started before I really finished ISRBY

The 3rd one is called "Another year over"

I love Nat and Riley ♥

ooh cool
I shall read when i get home!!

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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 02:25 am (UTC)
=o cooooooooooooooool beans.

The Heart Never Lies, I'll Stand Right Beside You, Another Year Over... I'm sensing a theme here. =]

I've (sadly) just remembered that Harry and Tom are together in the series, and I love them to death, so I guess I've always loved Fludd.

I just didn't realise it. XD
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 02:29 am (UTC)
=D

Lol yup the theme of the heart never lies ;-)

it's okay, a lot of people look beyond them as pones are the main couple =)

xxx
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
Lol, but Fletcher and Judd are the cutest couple in that book, to be honest. Tom is such a girl >_<

=] Random fact, but the way Harry proposed to him made my heart melt. =P
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
I'm biased and think Danny and Dougie are

Thank you! I had that part planned since the start of the book =D

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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 12:44 pm (UTC)
XD Of course you're biased, you're the author!

I have to go to school, unfortunately. =[

But only five weeks until the end of school!
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 09:25 pm (UTC)
Lol this is true ^_^

Aww, have fun honey

Yay for it almost being over!!
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wishfultales[info]wishfultales on April 21st, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
LOL, I had fun today, just coz they were my easy classes.

Guitar, Art, Theatre and American Society. =D

Sadly, tomorrow I have all my hard classes, like Pre-Calculus and Chemistry.

XD

How was/is your day?
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~*Star*~[info]star55 on April 21st, 2008 09:46 pm (UTC)
Ahh easy classes are the best!!
Aww *hugs* good luck with them!!

I've just woken up so the day has just started for me ^_^

Off to work now
xxx
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Rebecca.: Danny Forever In Your Eyes[info]stolenglancesx on April 21st, 2008 08:14 pm (UTC)
Well you told me all your other work was on LJ, so here I am, reading, and commenting.
I just have to say 'Awwwwwww' at that, cause it was soo adorable.
I can totally picture this entire thing, and I smiled through the whole thing. I lvoed how Danny totally made it all up on the spot, and it was just perfect.
I'm going all stalkerish too, cause its fun aha, and I'ma read and comment the rest cause you rock :)
xxx
 
 

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